Friday Fictioneers – Brothers
A Suitable Boy. Lord of the Rings. Clarissa. War And Peace. What do all these books have in common? Classics? Probably. Epics? Some say. Unputdownable? Could be. I’ve never read them? True. But what I had in mind was this – they’re all really really long. And as such, would never be allowed to appear in a FriFic post.
Because when Rochelle‘s email comes a-pingin’ into the inbox and we all start a-writin’ in response to the prompt pic we only get 100 words to begin, middle and end our fiction.
Here’s this week’s pic, one of Rochelle’s own:
If you want to read everyone’s literary output, pay a visit to Frogtopia where we all share. And then, if you fancy it, you can read my story too. Here it is:
When we were young, strangers always asked if my brother and I, a year apart, were twins. But our similarity was only skin-deep.
“You’re as different as sunshine and showers,” our Mum said. He was quieter, preferring the more scholarly indoor life, while I was happier outside, exploring, imagining. On camping holidays he saw every cloud as gathering storms, demanding to go home, but even the heaviest rainfall couldn’t persuade me to abandon the tents.
Now though, as adults, our differences are our strengths; I am an actor, he my agent and accountant. A family business we have built together.
Terrific story. Differences are important. A nice tale of brotherly relations!!
Thanks Laurie
A reminder that only by pooling many people’s skills do we achieve success
From each according to his ability, to each according to his need. Thanks for reading Neil
They stood back to back then walked in a circle! Excellent.
My 100 words
Thanks Keith! I love your comment, it sums up the brothers’ relationship perfectly
Different strengths are necessary to form a solid union. Well told.
We all have our role to play, we all have our strengths. thanks for reading 🙂
I love this! So often you hear of twins loathing each other or being so “the same” they could be interchangeable. Proof that we need diversity to succeed.
Thank you Dale. These two brothers found a way to make their differences work for them
I like how you brought this full circle.
Thanks Dawn. Sibling relationships change over time, usually for the better
I loved the line “You’re as different as sunshine and showers,” our Mum said. This had a nice easy feel that belied the tension between the brothers.
Thank you! That line was pretty much my starting point and it grewv from there
Dear TRG,
Nothing like capitalizing on differences. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
PS I’m guessing they don’t go on camping trips together.
Thanks Rochelle. No I think those trips are best left in the past 🙂
Brilliant and very insightful. Acknowledging and appreciating differences makes us stronger.
Thanks GAH. they worked out how their differences would help them both
Respect for everyone’s talents and viewpoints because the parts make the whole. Nicely done
Very true. Thanks Michael
Loved how you developed this.
Thanks Michael
It’s nice that they are so close, even though they are opposites.
I agree. Thanks for reading
Relationships are definitely stronger when people bring different things into it.
True! Thanks for reading