Friday Fictioneers – Home Security
Oh, hello you. Yes I know it’s Wednesday but I’m fully under the influence of the Cool Kids now, so here we go.
Rochelle sent us one of her own pics this week:
and as is compulsory traditional round these parts, 100 words have been written, shared with the Frog, and posted below…
Peter came back to the lounge, sat down.
“Who was at the door?” Pauline asked.
“Walter from next door.”
Pauline shared an anxious look with Percy.
“It’s okay,” Peter said, “I sent him away.”
“But…” Percy said, “surely he’ll be back…”
“That Walter guy gives me the creeps,” Pauline said, “just like William from our time on Wood Avenue.”
“Or Wilfred on Straw Street,” Percy added, “he was even worse.”
“Relax,” Peter said flicking the TV off mute, “we’re living on Stone Square now, a much safer neighbourhood.”
He lifted his feet onto a stool and contentedly scratched his chinny-chin-chin.
Little wolf, little wolf, let me in
Not this time!
Thanks for reading
playful and fun word placement with the alliteration – P’s, W’s and S’s
had a nice rhythm
Glad you liked it, thanks for reading
Very clever, TRG.
Thank you sir
The pigs have finally got it sussed.
All they needed was a decent estate agent. (that bit of the back story didn’t make the cut as I trimmed to 100 words!)
The last sentence made me laugh. See the wolf, know the wolf, be the wolf.
Why does Peter, Pauline and Percy not get along with their neighbours? What have they done?
Hi Abhijit, thanks for reading. They are the three little pigs from the fairy tale. Their neighbours are the wolves who keep blowing their houses down! But now they live in a stone house they’re safe 🙂
Thank you for explaining. I was not in the know of the fairy tale.
Sorry! I hope the explanation helped
Thank you. It did.
Wicked! 🙂
Thanks Sandra 🙂
Love it!
Thank you sir
Perfectly set up. I didn’t get it until the chinnie-chin-chin 🙂
Thanks for reading, I’m glad you liked it
Ha really good stuff! made me laugh, got the pig thing immediately, excellent!!
Thank you sir 🙂
LOL They say pigs are very smart animals. Your story proves it. Nice job
Thanks JoHawk
That was so much fun! Loved it.
Thank you! It was fun to write too
Clever stuff! Those wolves are in for a shock when they come down the chimney!
Thanks Jilly. They’ll find they’re messing with the wrong little pigs this time! 🐽
Dear RG,
There are wolves everywhere. Love this.
Shalom,
Rochelle
There are but in a stone house you can keep them at bay.
Thanks Rochelle 🙂
Very clever piece.
Thank you Lisa
.I didn’t get it until the end and then i literally laughed out loud.
Thanks for reading and I’m delighted you lolled 😀